Essay On Work Experience In French

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  1. Hello, Im in year 10 i have a writing exam on french about writing a magazine article about my work experience. In in the essay it must consist of these bullets;


    -Describe how the work experience was organised, where you worked, how long for and the hours you worked

    -Compare your daily routine during your work experience with your usual daily routine - my daily routine is to get up and go to school or hang out with friends compared to work routine was different and more exciting.

    -Describe what tasks you did during the work experience and give your opinion - I played with the kids, fed them, changed them, my opinion; i enjoyed it.

    -Describe your work colleagues and say if you got on with them - My colleagues were helpful and friendly and got on with them very well

    -Say whether you intend to do a similar job in the future or not - I wouldnt do a similar job as its not my type of job

    So far i have written

    Bonjour ! Je m'appelle ...., et je veux parler de mon stage entreprise qui était En avril dernière. C'était organise par la sous -directrice du collège .J' ai travaillé pour un maternelle privée, avec petite enfants, qui s' appelle 'Little Angels' qui se trouve à Londres du nord; 'Finsbury Park'.

    C'est duré une semaine, mais le vendredi avant mon stage, J'ai parlé du la sante et du la sécurité, parce que J'allais travailler avec les enfants de 2 mois et 4 ans.je l'ai commence lundi le 18 mars et j'ai fini à vendredi le 22 mars. Chaque matin je suis allée au travail en autobus, puis c'était un cinq minute à pied. J'y suis arrivé souvent à l'heure, mais j'y suis arrive un peu en retard sur deux jours; pourtant ce n'était jamais sérieux, parce que j'ai préparé le petit déjeuner, pour les enfants, quand j'y suis arrivé. Dans la première semaine je commencé à onze heure et je finis a six heure,


    I may have covered one or two bullet point, but struggling on how to phrase the bullets in which i wrote english next to, If you could give me good sentence starters, or a phase in french to do with that, that would be great
  2. Hey Sophsha,

    I hope it's not too late to give you some advices about your writing.
    First of all, have you done it really quickly? Because it looks like you did it quite fast and haven't even checked it before asking for help. If not, I'm sorry for having suggested it.

    To correct most of your mistakes, you have to have a dictionnary right next to you because you made some gender mistakes. I cannot give you the right one otherwise you won't remember them Also make sure you used the right preposition in front of the nouns. Check on the dictionnary. If you have any particular questions, let me know.

    Then, since this is a writing, you should structure your text more, just start on the next line, space your ideas, precise et do not use "mais", "pourtant", "parce que", .. too randomly. I mean there's one sentence you use all of them at the same time. Imagine it translated in your native language, it would sound weird, isn't it?

    Just take your time and explain clearly your ideas..

    "Bonjour,

    Je m'appelle ---.
    Aujourd'hui, je vais vous parler de mon stage en entreprise qui était en avril dernier."

    but also you can separate your ideas if you aren't sure if it makes sense in a whole one. For instance :

    "Aujourd'hui, je vais vous parler de mon stage en entreprise. Je l'ai fait (OR Je l'ai eu/réalisé) en avril dernier."

    See what i mean? That's so much clearer.

    Please check the gender of the following word :
    - maternelle (+ do not forget to "accorder l'adjectif" as well)
    - enfants (+ wrong about the adj again). In french, there always will have something in front of the plurial noun. Such as LES or DES, depends on the cases but you must have one of them.

    Hope it helped.
    Good luck!

    (Original post by Sophsha)
    Bonjour ! Je m'appelle ...., et je veux parler de mon stage entreprise qui était En avril dernière. C'était organise par la sous -directrice du collège .J' ai travaillé pour un maternelle privée, avec petite enfants, qui s' appelle 'Little Angels' qui se trouve à Londres du nord; 'Finsbury Park'.

    C'est duré une semaine, mais le vendredi avant mon stage, J'ai parlé du la sante et du la sécurité, parce que J'allais travailler avec les enfants de 2 mois et 4 ans.je l'ai commence lundi le 18 mars et j'ai fini à vendredi le 22 mars. Chaque matin je suis allée au travail en autobus, puis c'était un cinq minute à pied. J'y suis arrivé souvent à l'heure, mais j'y suis arrive un peu en retard sur deux jours; pourtant ce n'était jamais sérieux, parce que j'ai préparé le petit déjeuner, pour les enfants, quand j'y suis arrivé. Dans la première semaine je commencé à onze heure et je finis a six heure,


    I may have covered one or two bullet point, but struggling on how to phrase the bullets in which i wrote english next to, If you could give me good sentence starters, or a phase in french to do with that, that would be great

What jobs or work experience do your friends do?

Here are a few pointers for your reply.

Talk about the work experience your friends have had in the past and the part-time jobs they now have. Use the perfect and the present tense, for example:

  • pour son stage, il a travaillé dans une école, mais maintenant, il est vendeur dans un magasin de sport - for his work experience placement, he worked in a school but now he is a shop assistant in a sports shop

Include a range of jobs that require different verbs, for example:

  • être vendeur/vendeuse - to be a shop assistant
  • distribuer des journaux - to deliver newpapers
  • faire du baby-sitting - to babysit
  • travailler à l’usine - to work in a factory
  • laver des voitures - to wash cars
  • livrer des pizzas - to deliver pizzas

Give an opinion about the job:

  • c’est/ce n’est pas très - it is/it isn’t very
  • amusant - amusing
  • utile – useful
  • bien payé - well paid
  • mal payé - badly paid
  • difficile – difficult
  • fatigant – tiring
  • intéressant – interesting
  • ennuyeux - boring

About doing a similar job, say:

  • j’aimerais - I would like
  • j’aurais aimé - I would have liked
  • je n’aimerais pas - I would not like
  • je n’aurais pas aimé - I would not have liked

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